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Reviews For: Just Another Crazy Beginning

Cat, Avatar for the DCG
2006-05-23
ch 1,
abuseThe unkempt commando. I was rewarded in my reading by those two words alone. Thank you for writing- much fun was had by all. (All the voices in my head, one is left to assume. But maybe I was reading aloud.)
ANYhow. Keep up the good work, yeah?
Darth Rabbits
2006-05-05
ch 1,
abusewhat a great read!! You are brilliant
La Belladonna
2006-03-28
ch 1,
abuseWow, this was great. I nearly cried laughing so hard. Very colorful descriptions and very witty. Again, it was just great.
Queenofinsanity
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuselol
Prometheus71
2006-01-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was priceless, you must write more of these! Just to funny...love the way it ends like it does, a foreshadow of what is to come. Keep up the great writing!
Reklar
2006-01-16
ch 1,
abuseHah! That was a fun read, especially the ending! I haven't played KotOR myself, but I've seen most of that openning sequence before and this is a hilarious play on what I remember of it. I like that the "hero" has a nickname for everyone and that he appears to be even more noodle-spined than C3PO. :D As I said though, the ending is the best, because it's a funny way to foreshadow what you just read. Nice job, Freesourceful. You should write more humorous stories and share them. ;)

-Reklar
CherylHew
2006-01-13
ch 1,
abuseOmigod, that was pure genius, I tell you. Great work!! Still laughing my sorry ** off after reading it for the 3rd time XD The last part was precious and "Scruffy', LOL!! I actually hope you continue this, but ah well, KEEP ON DISHING STUFF LIKE THAT!! XD! You're awesome!!
Kendoka Girl
2006-01-12
ch 1,
abuseGreat start. I like how you use the first person here. Is this just a one shot?
Dragon Scales 13
2006-01-12
ch 1,
abuseXD! Ahh, that was great! Yay for dubious honors and Trask the Brave! ^-^
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