The unkempt commando. I was rewarded in my reading by those two words alone. Thank you for writing- much fun was had by all. (All the voices in my head, one is left to assume. But maybe I was reading aloud.)
ANYhow. Keep up the good work, yeah?

what a great read!! You are brilliant

Wow, this was great. I nearly cried laughing so hard. Very colorful descriptions and very witty. Again, it was just great.

lol

That was priceless, you must write more of these! Just to funny...love the way it ends like it does, a foreshadow of what is to come. Keep up the great writing!

Hah! That was a fun read, especially the ending! I haven't played KotOR myself, but I've seen most of that openning sequence before and this is a hilarious play on what I remember of it. I like that the "hero" has a nickname for everyone and that he appears to be even more noodle-spined than C3PO. :D As I said though, the ending is the best, because it's a funny way to foreshadow what you just read. Nice job, Freesourceful. You should write more humorous stories and share them. ;)

-Reklar

Omigod, that was pure genius, I tell you. Great work!! Still laughing my sorry ** off after reading it for the 3rd time XD The last part was precious and "Scruffy', LOL!! I actually hope you continue this, but ah well, KEEP ON DISHING STUFF LIKE THAT!! XD! You're awesome!!

Great start. I like how you use the first person here. Is this just a one shot?

XD! Ahh, that was great! Yay for dubious honors and Trask the Brave! ^-^