Kind of surprised that Don would send Charlie off with someone he doesn't know. Hmm... I would like to see where you will go with this story; it is quite intriguing.

Good story, it's a shame you haven't continued with it.

I think a good story tries to please finish

hey I just found this story. its good. will you update soon?

Oh brother. This is an interesting & a bit sad story. I love a good story full of Charlie. *grin*

I'd so love to know what happens next & how it ends. Please update soon.

i like update please

I would love to see what happens with this story. Please up date soon.

This is a great start to a story, you write really well and I hope that you'll be able to continue writing this fic soon.

Kind Regards

Good start. Can't wait untill its finshed. Keep writing.

I would love to see what happens next

wow

this is a great fic, even if there are just three chapters yet. I've just recently started to read numb3rs fanfic and I noticed there are many not too good fics out there. but I really love this one (even if there is not much). i like how you write and make it (for once) not about a case of don, but one cahrlie is more familiar with...

I really hope you're going to update again (and soon :-)

x, camlost

hey there! yeah, i actually read this a while back, but forgot to review, so here it is: this fic is really great so far!:) i love where you're going with this, your writing style, and most especially the originality of your plot - very refreshing to have an idea that hasn't been overdone about a billion times over:) update soon plz!:):)

this is the first time i've ever read a numb3rs fan fic i usually stick to reading supernatural and charmed. i was lucky that your story was the first numb3rs story i read because it's a good story and it made reading this less weird. hope you update soon.

Way too cool.

missed it, glad its back.

thanks

Geez, took you long enough! Just kiding. Glad to see you're still on this story, because I like it, a lot. Please update soon.