man
gud story
but ya noe
the yaoi stories almost always portray Kagome as a bitchy girl who wants inuyasha lol
but im not saying that that's a problem or anything :)

I really loved it! I hope you finish it to your satisfaction soon. I would love to see what you do it.

I so understand, I have a few stories were I rushed the plot, and did not go into the characters relationships.

Take your time, have fun. I'm sure we will love the stories once you have fixed them.

Kaito Naito

it is great the way it is now

personally, i think this is pretty good as it is. but i know what you mean. a bunch of my older stories i plan on eventually rewriting. as the moment, my life hectic and quickly spiraling out of control and i barely have time to work on my newer stories, much less rewrite my older ones. but anyway, i can't wait to see what you do with this when you do rewrite it!!

It's official: I hate Kagome. She's a **. Period.
Apart from that... I absolutely love this story!! Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are so cute together!! <3 And their family is so cool! I love it, really.
I hope you get on with it soon. It's really good!

as the people have said before me~ We do enjoy this story, despite the plot holes, and we would really like for you to continue this wonderful story! If your going to re-write it, then please re-write it asap... Because, just like other people have said, I don't want to wait some 2 -3 years for you to finally feel like continuing this story...if you ever do... PLEASE, continue/rewrite this story soon, I re-read it several times, and its starting to kill me not being able to read anymore!

Update this one too (asap) too PLEASE! I just finished reading the new version of A life time of Illusions and it seems awesome! But I really wana read this again, and have it continue!! so please, if you have time, and don't have a writers block, update/ write the new version you were talking about! I can't wait to read it!

great fic! ^^
update soon
=)

Well, if you're going to rewrite this story, then please hurry. This is a very interesting plotline (despite what you may think) and I would be rather irritated if I had to wait for another 2 years.

I very much like this version of your story but I do look forward to reading the more mature writing you most likely now have. I have to wonder, are you going to post the rewrite as a new story or merely replace the chapters of this one?

~Reivyn

nice! muwah makes me laugh a little inside. well evily anyways. =DD

I'll read later yes. ;D

Hi!

I was becoming very woried about these fics. they are very special to me the plot were intresting and very exciting, but if you are assuring me that these wonderful fics will be better so I will be aweiting for them but please just one request:
PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO MUCH MORE TIME. I alread know by heart The Inyasha and I am reading Naruto's fics too... So if you can just post one a month maybe??

OWW please do not feel pressure from me .

I am just a fan and as all fans off the world I become sap sometimes...

Kisses

Tina chan

Sory about my spelling

Damn, and I was so excited to see updates for those stories. As much as it pains me to wait even longer for an update, I'm really glad that you let your readers know that you hadn't given up on the stories. I'm looking forward to reading these new and improved stories!

i really like the story i got to the last chap and i can't wait for the next one. i hope that they get to finsh what sesshoumaru and inuyasha started in the chap 11.