Hey Hey Hey!! Good job and I definitely think you should continue!! Great Great GREAT story! CONTINUE PLEASE!! LOL

O, please continue

I can't hardly wait 'till the next chapter! This is really great...no, fantastic!

that was brill i loved it!

I can't wait for the next chapter. Wonder how Sara will react...

Hey cliffhanger man i was lookin forwad to the next chap please update soon btw thanks for mentioning me From Lauren

i love it you should definatley write more thanks for mentioning me

Yes!

Continue please.

Good job!!

it would be good to see him fight for her instead of her to him, for a change. she said in the poem that she doent want him. i think that a good start. she is stronger now, emotionally, and it feels great.

:)

i ththat was a nice poem. i will tell my friends about it.

natasha i love it you should definetly write more