Reviews for Moi Lolita & Red haired Vixens

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Alexander - Godslayer 2006-03-28 ch 1,	abuseOh, God... Would you believe if I tell you I was planing on making a fic like this? (Althought I was planing a very explicit and graphic one, hehe) The fic was great in both the fights and the heat scenes. In my oppinion, that's a hard combination to find. Never expect the two to be good. But this chapter was great. I didn't like the fact of Nevan as a man. Althought the problem probably is that I was expecting a yuri from this. Anyway, time to read the next chapter!
gu_tango 2006-02-06 ch 2, anon.	abuseO_o er...that's quite scary me >A
Cekil1 2006-02-03 ch 2,	abuseWow. Very nicely done my friend. I can only hope SOMEONE can persuade you to make yourself a account and post any and all stories you have (or have yet to) write. Thanks.
Vylet Lust 2006-02-01 ch 2,	abuseWhoa! Love this chapter. LoL. Can't wait to read the next one. Please, update very soon. ~much love, p.k.
Bustahead 2006-02-01 ch 2, anon.	abuse(giggles) hey Chris! (giggles) so, when are you going to get an ff account? (grins) Because this was super! Your interpretation of things are aways so amusing and one day, I wonder what you'd make out of one of my things! XD! Anyway, this was delightfully naughty, and the amount of double intedres in here? (whistles) Overall, great two chapters, the both of you!
Bustahead 2006-02-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseINKA BINKA MOO MOO MOO! (coughs) sorry, I just HAD to do that for some odd reason! Anyway! Just wanted to say that I loved this chpter and I'm sorry I didn't get to it sooner. I promise, I'll read Mayan Masks as soon as I possibly can!
Laryna6 2006-01-31 ch 2,	abuseVery descriptive! I like your versions of them. Let's see, constructive commentary... Good thinking about Nevan's powers, you never forget she's a demon even though she seems to make Lady sort of do so. She's also very experienced and in control of the situation, which is how it would be. I like the innuendo, Nevan is innuendo, and more... I like Lady looking at Dante: you've got what she would see and what she wouldn't see. Making a point of her mission at the beginning is good, it highlights how she's deviating from it. Very good, Tyrant Hamster!
BJ 2006-01-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseV! gasps That was dirty! But in a good way... fans self
Jackpot 2006-01-30 ch 2, anon.	abuseAwesome story, Tyrant Hamster! I totally love the poetic description you used throughout the fic. And the slight Nevan x Lady was also done well! Keep up the good work. :)
The Very Same Tyrant Hamste... 2006-01-30 ch 2, anon.	abuseHehehe, yeah this is me, the person who wrote this :D. I just wanted to drop a comment thanking my dear super buddy for posting this excerpt of my story I wrote for her here, it's really flattering and I hope you all enjoy it at least some, thanks to absolutely anyone and everyone who reviews, it's greatly appreciated ^^!
Jorgey Limey 2006-01-16 ch 1,	abusewow. that's hot. maybe you can make the REAL version of it and email it to me! i love fanfics...just like these...pretty cool...
Iesha 2006-01-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseI loved the opening scene with all the action and fighting, great way to start the story. It was a very good read, just wish you could have put more of the hot stuff!
Chaos Sparda 2006-01-15 ch 1,	abuseWhat is this? A yuri in the fandom. And not a bad one. When the hell did that happen? I believe you hold the honor of first DMC yuri on this site. Huzzah.
Xielzen 2006-01-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is very interesting; a little different, but is done tastefully and well. I would've liked a little more detail in the fighting toward the end, however the comments between the two were most amusing and made up for it. Well done!
sonlyme 2006-01-14 ch 1,	abusem...very nice. And I loved the way that lady was perplexed in the end when she was faced with her true hunger... Nice fantasy musing. ;)

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