This sounds like it's going to be a great story

The setting is perfect and it's very realistic the way the characters act

I loved the pickle scene ' )

Please continue

OMFG! hilarious :P

yew made 2d a freakind dumbass lawlz great job 3

Well what's it gonna be you gonna finish this story or not. I don't mean to be rude it's just that I want to see what happens next or you can make a sequel. I don't know I'm just given out ideas. DO something ASAP!PLEASE!

NO! Johnny YOU WILL BE AVENG- oh look a racoon! Great story, by the way mikey the pickle will live on in our hearts!

Oh c'mon for crying out loud, UPDATE! You said it was only one chappie left!

nice fanfic.I can't stop laughin.I laughed too much until my parents stare at me n call me "siao"("crazy" in chinese.but I'm not chinese tho XD).plz continue..plz..pretty plz..wif chocolate-strawberry filled ice cream wif lil cute sprinkles on it..TRY!-

Noodle is dying all right, her brain cells are shutting down

hope they make it

please continue... i really want to see Noodle's condition

tubucalosis is the deseise you asked for some kids died from it in the old days

poor Noodle please continue

what does hyaommanahchi mean? if you need help with this story just ask i helped with madame pegusus's "Bob's transformation"

2 3 etc. chapters

no offense to the rest of you readers

tuburculosis- bacterial infection

this chapter is unrealistic seeing as 2-D is alergic to pickles and couldn't possibly have one with him

have vultures circle overhead and one try to eat Noodle thinking she's deadd and someone in her group stop it somehow

?WHAT? IM GONNA PUKE FROM LAUGHING SO MUCH! How do ou come up with this shite? Ha, I beat you little bleeper things! Hehehehehehehehehe. Kill me! PLEASE! Update so I can continue. Ill just suffer from... LAUGHiTIOUS! I love Rock It! I would like the vid, but I dont really like the zombie heads... *runs around in circles* DOOMED! We are all doomed! Murdoc... babytalk... ? Inverted cross... shiny. PRETTY PRETTY, SHINY SHINY! GIVE ME THE PRETTY PRETTY, SHINY SHINY! I'm not okay (i promise)! life is but a DREAM! Help. ypu made me crazy... HELP! Or ill... chop you up into little pieces and spread you across America in all the places you hate! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

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ps: Please help meh...

LOLOLOLOLOLOL! Huh? That was... weird. Firmly isn't a big word. The Mary Popins' word is a big word! Precariously... is a big word. I hope you know I'm laughing my guts out right now, and that I hate you for it...

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