Wow, great job! I wish we'd seen a more of Griffin in the shows, he was great, really reminded me of one of my friends. :P Great job on portraying him. That was definatly a great episode. *nods*

nice! never thought of Griffin as much, he was brave thou, very brave...

Wow. This is a wonderful pov you have of Griffin! You have captured his voice and his last moments well. Such a sacrifice. I liked your expression of Rodney when Griffin moved to the front of the jumper to shut the bulkhead doors, "A deer in the headlights". That really gave the effect of how Rodney suddenly realized what Griffin was going to do, but unable to stop from happening. :) Again, great work! I look forward to reading more of your stories.