CHARLES
YOU MUSNT CRY
I SHALL NOT ALLOW SUCH A PREDICAMENT TO OCCUR

*shoots a random bird*
DIE

please, please, PLEASE.
update this.
I love it.
please?

Hi! I've gone through all these amazing 20 chapters, and i've really enjoyed reading all of them!! I specially like how you've been handling something so delicate as a relationship like theirs. Hope you write more soon!

wow, I've been reading this for 2 days maybe and I've come to a conclusion...this is brilliance! :D i wonder if WIlly's half vampire? hmm, adding to story alerts! please update soon

The Puppet room in Willy's factory is called The Puppet Hospital and Burn Center.

OMG! WILLY WONKA MIGHT BE PART VAMPIRE MAYBE??! PLEASE FINISH THIS AWESOME STORY!

When I got the email saying you'd updated i nearly burst into a random happy dance :D
This was a really interesting chapter... I wonder who Willy's Mum is, well, what Willy's Mum is.
Please update as soon as you can =)

The Puppet and Burn Hospital! OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD- WRITE MORE! My gosh the best part was the wrists, and Doris...

You MUST put in some Willy suffering here!

:flashforward:

Charlie learns more about Wonka as he fights the deadly illness (angst here) and then story continues...

I'm so glad you updated because nobody has in months!! :glomp:

XD When I got the email that yopu had updated my mouth went from :O to :D It was really good!! My favorite line was, "If she was his height, Doris might have patted Charlie’s shoulder. As it was, she patted his calf." It made me giggle like a school girl talking to her crush, PFT! Wondefully done and worth the wait! I wonder who his mother is?! Update soon, I might kill myself by thinking about it too hard! Ha ha! <3

Please update soon! I love this story!

Aw dayumm, just when it was gettin dishy!*lol* Oh the name of that room is The Puppet Hospital & Burn Centre. :-Dxx

"yay* claps hands stupidly * "you updated!" that was a verry good chapter and an even better place to leave off. Im sry about your flamer tho.

This line cracked me up."“Well then you’re both as bad as one another, and completely suited together. Part of the reason he let you come was that so he could show off himself, you know.”" lol that was very funny.

Lilith

Ah! Why don't you update this story! I must know what happens to him! Don't die Mr. Wonka! We're just getting to the good part!

your evil leaving the story there. Poor Wonka. I ike the strange mixture of depp and book wonka. I also like the mention of mr turkentine he alway makes me laugh when i watch the wilder movie. You hve been favourited.

Ha! After three days of reading(it was quite exhausting, i'm not a fast reader @.@) I've made it to your latest update and WOW!! That was fan-freakin-tastic! Totally worth the hours(trust me it was hours ^^') reading! *sparkly eyes* You're really a great writer! Are you going to do this professionally?! If so i'll buy the first book, I promise! I can't wait for the next update ^-^ he he