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Blue Stem Cell
2008-07-24
ch 18,
abuseThank you for the update! ^^ It made my evening too read. I really didn't expect the whole family to argue at each other though. I tend to wander off places of Christmas day and my family have never minded but my step mum, like Mrs. Bucket, won't let anyone leave that day. My brother and sister are bounded to the house. XD

And I like them curled up in bed together becasue I'm a soppy git like that.
BrittnixBabe
2008-07-21
ch 18,
abuseyay an update! :D

I can't wait to see what happens in loompa-land!
JackleAndFangirl67
2008-07-20
ch 18,
abuseThank you so much for updating! I love this!
Ruby-Ella
2008-07-19
ch 18,
abuseOnce again this is a brilliant chapter!
Mrs. Bucket's temper made it even better :)
I really like the way you write.
Well done :)
Miz-Nu-Booty
2008-07-19
ch 18,
abuseSalut! Still loving the story. Poor Mrs.Bucket,I didnt exspect everyone to agree against her,,that was a suprise indeed.But I trust Mr.Wonka will take care of his amour. *warm smilz* the story is gettin jucier! Merci a toi x (thank u)
DRkLRVangel
2008-07-15
ch 17,
abuseAs usual B-E-A-Utiful work ;}
I liked your "earthrise" and a romantic Wanka was a nice touch.
When will Wanka take off the gloves with Charlie?
I can't wait to see how you layout the next chapter, How far away is Christmas now? :}
Ne way very nice job, can't wait to see what you/Charlie and Wanka do in the next chapter. ;>
Akatsuki Feathers
2008-06-25
ch 17,
abuseThis story is absolutely wonderful and adorable and- and, I can't gather any more words that would describe this story with justice.
-heart-
Everything is just so sweet. I love it!
:D
BrittnixBabe
2008-06-15
ch 17,
abuseWow. I started this story a few days ago (17 chapters late... better late than never, right?) and I just HAD to catch up. I was afraid when I saw the description that it would be too weird to finish. While it was very weird, it wasn't a bad weird. Does that make sense? Anyway, I guess what I'm rambling on about is this:

This story is really, really, good. So well written. I'm a picky reader, and I'm very impressed. So, three cheers for you! :D

I am definently and anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

By the way, 'Space Oddity' is a song by David Bowie (released Nov. 4, 1969) Hope that helps!
beebsy1219
2008-06-15
ch 17,
abuseI'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! Please continue soon! It would make me VERY happy!Umm... and... I love it! so... YEA!
Blue Stem Cell
2008-06-11
ch 17,
abuseThankyou for updating ^^ I've been checking this every week just too see if you had updated it and you didn't disappoint.
I love how you made Dorris the "mummy" figure, it's very sweet picturing a middle aged man in a dress fuss over wonka, well that came wrong! =D

Looking forward to the next chapter ^^
JackleAndFangirl67
2008-06-10
ch 17,
abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON! I WANNA FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!
mkyla
2008-06-09
ch 17,
abuse50 dollars says I know what Wonka mumbled after 'I...' How sweet!
blackpanther-690
2008-06-07
ch 17,
abuseGreat Chapter!
Although Charlie ignoring his parents kinda worries me, poor Buckets!
The room 'Space Oddity' is the name of an old David Bowie song.
Keep up the good work and update soon. :)

PS love the reference to Angel Sanctuary, is one of my favorite manga's.
Ruby-Ella
2008-06-06
ch 17,
abuseWow! That chapter was really good. They're getting more interesting everytime :)
Keep it up :)
Zx2-152
2008-06-06
ch 17, anon.
abuseAwesome-tastic-fabular! :D

Wait.

That's not a word. XD

Anywho, Space Oddity is from the song, 'Space Oddity', by David Bowie. Might be from somewhere else, too. ^_^

*wonders how long it'll be til Charlie's parents find out*
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