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| Pikados 2008-07-22 ch 1,  | abuseHm... If it's Allie, why were their jobs in the way (as stated earlier in the story)? |
| raiders 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. It was so descriptive about his feelings. I loved it. I can't believe he said "I love you Allie." That's horrible |
| Kate 2006-01-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was ok. It would b better if it was Sue, and if u add another part to it. |
| trecebo 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseGi-i-i-i-i-i-rl, you have a talent for misdirection. You really rocked this one. It was just like it should be one person and then BAM, it was the person HE was thinking of. You go, Girl! Woo HOO! |
| aubreysmom 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseROFL! Unlike some, who can't seem to get it through their heads that this is FICTION, and a TV SHOW... I think this is a riot. VERY nicely crafted, keeping your reader thinking on one track while leading them totally in another. Brava!! |
| sharon 2006-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseICKY! this was good up until the name allie |
| Hopeless-Romantic-Daydreame... 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI like the story up until the point that he says Allie I think that Jack and Sue should be together not him and another woman |
| pryrmtns 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI kept waiting for the other shoe... :snerk: Loved it! |