omg I snorted so hard i hurt myself...and sort of nearly fell of my bed. I think my soul left my body. just omg!

"if you build it, they will come" omg haha I can't stop laughing to the point it's painful.

I really don't get this anymore.
phish with PH ??

youve , isnt
Found two.

"yoa" Thats spell check for "to a" if I'm corect.

That line with the american Idol cracked me up.
On my computer when I do word check some of the words go crazy and get mixed up, some of yours did. So maybe read it over again after doing a word check. After the song you didn't leave a line so you coulden't really tell what was lyrics and what was speach. Maybe next time put the lyrics in italic. Thanks
And sorry for being bitchy, I'm just born that way.

Yay! Within Temptation!

(falls out of chair)
AHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

~PIXIE

HAHHAHAHAH -dies laughin- x.x -revives- HAHAHHA XD funny...funny and cute mainly funny

I understand the need to collect the shinies. Perfectly.

It was very good. But, the part where Kyrie was introduced (in the chapter) was kind of...confusing.

lol That was funny. Lol So Malchior likes cds. lol Cool. Shinies. lol Who doesn't like shinies? lol That was great! Please update asap!

ps:

Ha Ha Malchiors shinys lol hehe cant wait for your next chappie

I absolutely love it!

I heartily endorse this little vignette. Raven perfectly in character, Malchior and Rorek perfectly ridiculous...
Nice!
Booyahs!
~Vin

HaHa Great Chappie :D:D