Very fascinating idea, about the spiral. I like how you broke away from the stereotypical line and circle.

You know that story did prove a good point. History does repeat itself ex. Tsunade Sakura, Orochimaru Sasuke, Jiraiya Naruto. Anyways great work.

i thought this was done well. nice future fic.

would appreciate if you check out my fic 'the wrong boy' written under Hollow Productions; its another talk about the parrallels of the teams

Excellent story and interesting concept. I enjoyed it =).

I like it! It's good! Sad, how Sasuke left. But he came back so therefore there's one characteristic that does not make their team like Tsunade's

Interesting story.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

yes love it. i've been thinking about this sort of fic for about two weeks now thinking of writing one along these lines of how history repeats itself, but had been discouraged by the almost non-existant amount of stories along that line. i am so glad i am not the only one to see these similarities. also i like the sprial theroy and totally agree with it its a very good idea, and true in reality. thank you for writing this and inspiring me some more.

Awesome! I especially loved the ending with Kakashi in it! ^_^ 'All scowling and stuff' ^_^ Loved it!

*grumbles* now I have to go and update my stories ASAP...

Sayonara,

Tenshi-Battosai

Great begining!!^^