Wow. This is quite a wonderful story. I enjoyed every aspect of it, from the emotional frustration to the revelations of Miyako's relationships, and finally to the crossbreeding.

Ken is pretty bright, with or without the dark spore, so I think he would indeed realize that Natte wasn't his child, unless he was too distracted with the inner battles he fought.

I just want you to know that I am adding this to my new C2 group, Soulmate. :D

Well done!

It was nice to see Miyako work through her grief like that... although I'm not sure what to think about what happened with her and Shurimon. Eh, you write whatever you like, and more power to you for it!

You could never imagine the look on my face when it clued in who Natte's dad was. Lol. Normally I wouldn't be bothered with Miyako, but this was okay. Maybe I'll go read some more Miyako fics. ; I really liked at the end how Hawkmon made Miyako feel better about never telling Ken how she really felt. That was really sweet. At first when Miyako said she should hurt, I thought she was going to be angry about Ken and Wormmon's relationship. ;

Anyhoo, good fic. _ Well done!

That was really wierd, and confusing.

You really are gooked on the humanpartner thing, arn't you?

I have a question, how could she? With a bird? And a what?

I'm confused, but then I am very small. (Lord of the Rings)

Anyways, that was pretty cool though.

Miyako RULES!

Wong means King

Uh...whoa. um...did you put some crossbreeding here? i don't mind...but i can't tell...cool fic, tho! you had to kill of Ichijouji-kun! *sobs* he was so cute and HOT...and...*sobs sobs sobs* GOOD GOOD FIC, THOUGH!

*sniffles* I still come close to tears every time I read this...it's just so...BEAUTIFUL!

Awesome story! Yet again, I must say that I am stunned. ::looks at the author's profile pic:: Whoa! ::drooling and strange slurping noises are heard::mahhh...::smacks herself::Back to the fic. Wow. Just...awesome. I loved it! _ VD

Have I mentioned how much I like this fic? Well, guess I'm mentioning it now!

Nice. Interesting take. I'm not sure of the biochemistry involved, but that's unimportant. A good character piece.

So Sweet!

That was... surprising. Nice job.

::sniffs:: So sad... but very beautifully written. I'm very, very impressed with this... and it's so... thorough and extremely good!

Wow. That was great!