i love your story! Please keep writing.

This was wonderful! I think this might be one of the best P&P modern adaptations I've come across. I loved the way you were able to put your own twist on the events of the original book, which made things fun and fresh but didn't detract from the overall love story between Lizzy and Darcy. Lizzy also had just the right amount of spunk, without being too outrageous or outright rude, which is a problem I've come across reading other fics. And I think I may have have a bit of a crush on your version of Darcy. Where can I find someone like him?

Anyhow, just wanted to congratulate you on the piece and thank you for sharing it. I hope you'll be writing more stories in the future!

You're a genius.

Hi, I know I'm getting to this really late but WOW. This is incredible - the writing, the imagination, the references - excellent. Are you published? Who are you? WOW. I'm enjoying this so much. Thank you!

This story is absolutely wonderful! I just re-read it for the second time, and I love it even more. I loved the personalities and backgrounds you gave the characters, they were similar to the original, but still clearly your own ideas. I liked that for a change, Mr. Darcy was not just handed his money, that he earned it by having musical talent.
I could continue to go on and on about this story, but I'll just say finish by saying amazing job!! Thank you for sharing!

I think Will's the only one whose faults are always on display. He doesn't really deserve all the heat he constantly gets, in my opinion.

I can't believe Lizzie.
aaw, they just accepted to get married
**laughs hysterically**
geez i laughed a lot
thx for the story.

it was ok.thought i think i got used to the other plots ending with the marriage part lol, still I like your story ^^

cheers!

uhm... actually well I think everybody overreacted and everyone picked on Will. At least I see it that way...Of course what he did it was without thinking he'll hurt anyone.
but that marry me and Lizzie saying no is getting real old and oh
too much drama...
At this point it's like doubtful that these would marry **snorts*
both act really really bad...and Lizzie and Georgiana have turned annoying in some parts.
Well at least Will keeps from responding for quite a while and from his side it doesn't seem fair that everybody starts pointing without putting themselves in his shoes for a change.
OMG
what a TERRIBLE misunderstanding.
geez, I wonder how Will is not depressed.
:)
thx for the chapter!

no way. I can't believe Lizzie will have a phobia to get married.
that's so ridiculous as Will thinking he's a bad person.
but I feel for him. Sure it would make him think that's the reason why Liz doesn't want to get married

man
this chapter makes me want to smack Lizzie so ** the back of her head!
what in the world?!
poor Will, he must have already given up on the idea of marrying her...almost surrendering?

**laughs hysterically**
first the gambles with Fitz and surprises
OMG
I'll explode soon enough now

BUT THIS IS REAL LAUGHING MATERIAL
"We’re kind of entering the dangerous, icy curves section of the drive, so if you could postpone your **-kicking until we exit the vehicle.”

“But you know, no pressure. I just thought it’d be nice to survive the drive,”“Zarine might miss me. Mags, too.”

LOL AND TO TOP IT ALL THE DARCYS SIBLINGS' TEMPER
priceless
ROFL

?
what
Lizzie is insane! why wouldn't she just say yes and the end!
HA HA HA HA
Ew I feel for Will for I hate coffee but love tea!

OMG OMG!
finally!
charlie and Jane together again soon!
and Lizzie and Darcy too!!
woo hoo

oh man how cruel
I hope Liz and Lydia make Jane listen to that music!
poor Will
at least he had a good intention!
but good anyway Lydia didn't get with that tramp!

hey and what about Will and Lizzie?!

ok.
first JAne is mad
and now he punches Wickham
definitely the world has gone MAD.
omg,wickham told everything and Lydia didn't even understand anythin!