Well, I'm pretty sure this story is not going to be updated for a while, but I just wanted to say that I enjoyed it quite a bit.

It's hard to find a T/P story where Pan isn't blubbering and ridiculously childish. It's also tough to find a story where Trunks isn't a complete man-whore. I love the fact that you have them speaking to each other in a reasonably intelligent manner. You also did well to flesh them out. I like the idea of Pan as a teacher.

Still bummed that the story likely won't go on, but I bookmarked it anyways _

i want more plzzzzz... i'm itching for sum more

Omg write more I am so in love with this story

Wow, just wow. I have no idea how I ever managed to not read this before. But utterly it blew me away. I wish oh so much that this was continued. But it's been years and that drives me nuts, but thankfully you ended it(the chapter) with hope for tomorrow, with them now knowing that they each feel something, so it won't drive me crazy. You are my personal hero. Much love!

Your story makes me giggle like a little girl. Haha. It was great, update soon, please and thank you. :D

Hi shoka,

I ‘ve just finished reading your story and I love it! I’m kind of

new here, but I’ve been reading a lot of fiction, I have my favorites

and I can tell you this is one of them, including some of my favorites,

this is different in style and almost all stories show a very fast

start, comes to a peek and die or finish abrouptely, yours is different, I

can enjoy a low start, a very well definition of characters, increasing

the level of story step by step, language and scenes aren’t so wild,

just enough to keep your interest, very good advance, I believe it’s on

its peek right now, and Im kind of desperate for reading next

chapter...lol.

I really & honestly congratulate you, I love the way you’re writing.

Please, keep updating and keep thar rythm, if u ask my opinion I should

add next a romantic chapter, maybe some lime or kind of, (and Im not

talking about rough scenes) you can prolong your story maybe 9 chapter

or more, cause is very interesting, maybe you can add some stories about

another lifes like bra, goten, gohan, non necesarily involving

pairings.

And make a very good to keep open the posibility of make a

continuation.

Thanks for reading my review. Sincerily,

Eyre

I've just read the first three chapters and I thinks is pretty good, I hope you actualize very soon, 'cause its for sure I'm gonna finish all today! thanks shoka,

haha, what a cute ending with her buying a tabloid with a sighting of her and trunks together in it. thats funny that she has a good sense of humor about it.

i like reading all of your detail work, its good and makes the story 3d rather than flat and boring.

i really like this story. You make the characters real, and they each have a clear personality. I like that believable edge.

omg! IT was great perfect... I cant say anymore without sounding lame...I am so glad I have come back to read it... I left off at the sleeping face to face chapter... I will always remember it... I love this story

wow, cutest story ever. haha it makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. i love how you're writing this- it really makes Pan sincere and realistic. post soon!

*spins in circles all starry eyes* la lala la la

Vegeta: Woman what in the fuck are you doing?

I'm dancing veggie head

Vegeta: i can very well see that but what... is with.. the eyes and the... lala's

I LOVE TPs *giggles and continues spinning*

Vegeta: gr *points to author* you author continue ur story to the very end and make it snappy!

Please! Update soon *spins faster making herself dizzy and falling over*

No. This isn't terrible. This is terrific. I thought that this was a cute chapter, and I finally got that official kiss. So yay Wonderful tension...um I mean wonderful update. I can't wait to see what else that mind of yours has in store for next. You're writing is just amazing and I'm so jealous. Keep up the great work. Laters.

next please!

aw i this story. update. do for me.