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| Abbie 2008-01-04 ch 9, anon. | abuseReally enjoyed your story. Good dialog and Rachel was a interesting, well developed character. |
| Winsome Elf 2006-10-24 ch 9,  | abuseI THOROUGHLY enjoyed this story. Not only did it have a great plot, but your characterizations of Dean and Sam were right on, and Rachel was an utterly adorable character. I look forward to reading your other stories in the series. |
| EmSyd 2006-09-20 ch 9, | abuseAwesome. |
| Supernaturally Angelic 2006-04-21 ch 9, | abuseo i absolutely loved it |
| Rosemarykiss 2006-01-29 ch 9, | abuseNice, I like Rachel, she reminds me of Fred from Angel. Good fic;) |
| twotoe 2006-01-25 ch 6, anon. | abuseI love this chapter 6. It has all that fun buildup and I think you capture Dean as slightly dangerous very well. I imagine that is probably true to character. But you didn't take it to the next level which wouldn't have been nearly as interesting I think. I love the swooning lines at the confrontation with Dean. Really nicely done all around. |
| shelaweena 2006-01-25 ch 9, anon. | abuseOh! Very few stories actually give me chills. This one did and I loved it! Will there be a sequel? |
| Grace 2006-01-25 ch 9, anon. | abuseAWESOME! Really hope to see more of this character, and your writing in general! Great work! :) |
| twotoe 2006-01-24 ch 9, anon. | abuseThis was a really great story. I loved that you gave us some hints about Dean and Rachael but were restrained about how far you took it. I was really afraid for a little while that I might be reading another Dean/mystery girl romance where they end up together or she is pregnant. Or even that the romance ends up being the story. I wasn't afraid for long as you did a great job. Thanks for a wonderful female OC story with Sam and Dean. Really nice job. |
| Ghostwriter 2006-01-24 ch 9, | abuseSequel. Yay. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| BubbleGumEcstasy 2006-01-24 ch 9, | abuseThis was an awesome story!! you should really continue with this! It's defanitly(lol can't get the spelling right on that one) one of my favorites. ~Lady Venya of the isle |
| Ghostwriter 2006-01-24 ch 8, | abuseOh, cool. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Spuffyshipper 2006-01-24 ch 8, anon. | abuseGood chapter.I like the Dean/Rachel aspects.I hope they get together.Update soon. |
| BubbleGumEcstasy 2006-01-23 ch 7, | abuseLol love it!! Keep going with this! |
| Lilithxfic 2006-01-23 ch 7, | abuseHI there!! The story is very good! Go on:-) waiting for the updating:-) |