 Maiden of the Undead 2007-02-10 . chapter 7Interesting story, please update soon. |
 superfreak9201 2006-07-12 . chapter 7please update soon !! love it already |
 Duchess192 2006-06-05 . chapter 7I'm glad:) Anywho way to update!! |
 RoKKiiNMuffiiNPyRo 2006-06-04 . chapter 7That was'nt a poor attempt! It was a great chappie! Update again soon! |
 fullmetalnin 2006-03-25 . chapter 6You haven't been updating for a while, you still alive? |
 windflame 2006-03-11 . chapter 6this is a great stroy i can't wait till next chapter pleases update soon. |
 DeafLizgon 2006-03-11 . chapter 6(jaw drop) Jack's disappeared/kidnapped?! O__O |
 Kosmic 2006-03-11 . chapter 6Nice keep it up. |
 Duchess192 2006-03-11 . chapter 6It's good 3 no ur alive:) and Jack got kidnapped?... |
 BAM Aesthetic 2006-02-14 . chapter 5okay... the intruder is one of the heylin people... correct? or no correct? omg. this could go how many different directions ;_; hahaha. |
 Duchess192 2006-02-14 . chapter 5O. Sugar and cliffies r not a good combo:) |
 DeafLizgon 2006-02-14 . chapter 5Ooh! Cliffy! ^_^
Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up! *chants* |
 Kosmic 2006-02-14 . chapter 5Nice work keep it up. |
 DeafLizgon 2006-02-08 . chapter 4XD Don't tell me Omi don't know how to play a game?! Keep going! ^_^ |
 Duchess192 2006-02-08 . chapter 4(I'm soo dumb) What is OOC PLEASE tell me & update. PS great new chappie:) |