Interesting story, please update soon.

please update soon !! love it already

I'm glad:) Anywho way to update!!

That was'nt a poor attempt! It was a great chappie! Update again soon!

You haven't been updating for a while, you still alive?

this is a great stroy i can't wait till next chapter pleases update soon.

(jaw drop) Jack's disappeared/kidnapped?! O__O

Nice keep it up.

It's good 3 no ur alive:) and Jack got kidnapped?...

okay... the intruder is one of the heylin people... correct? or no correct? omg. this could go how many different directions ;_; hahaha.

O. Sugar and cliffies r not a good combo:)

Ooh! Cliffy! ^_^

Keep it up, Keep it up, Keep it up! *chants*

Nice work keep it up.

XD Don't tell me Omi don't know how to play a game?! Keep going! ^_^

(I'm soo dumb) What is OOC PLEASE tell me & update. PS great new chappie:)