duude. wow. a girl who's maybe not the lead main protagonist. that's amazing just in itself, then not to mention that this is written just so wow. it's so good! awesome job!

Wow this is really good! Write more ASAP..I want to know! lol.

Gav

whoa.. what happened between the 2 of them? please post soon!

Natz! My partna in crime! How goes it? Great story so far! I LOOOVE it! Is this Jo character a bit EVIL? *Cackles... coughs* Sorry, cackling isn't my thing, obviously! That belongs to you! Keep up the great work. Work on our story, woman, lol.

who is she? where was she? very mysterious! me likes! bam.

Really good so far! And you picked an awesome name for your character, if I do say so myself. Þ Anywho, keep up the great work, can't wait for more!

hurry n right more it was rally good oh go d i can' type lol i think u ge the idea good wrok keep it up n write fast

i love the way you wrote this story at the beginning, it was really different and interesting! this whole storyline is very, very intriguing, please write more!

oh god!please don't try to do anytthing like my story, which coincidentally has almost the same title!("homecoming")i'm not saying your story isn't good, but oh god!oh god!i'm...i dunno what to say...

you have my attention! great start.