hey, liked it. nice to see you updated!

post more, ots of q's need answering!

cool, gonna read more!

could do with a littlew more descrition, but i like the idea. i'm off to read more!

You're still doing very well. Keep it up, I love it!

This is still a very good story. Keep it up, girl!

This was pretty good for a first chapter. It's really short, (especially compared to mine,) and that's cool. But this is great. It's really simple and sweet. And yuo have a good summary as the history of your story. Great job! Keep it up!

this is a very good very original story idea i look foward to reading the rest of it.

love it