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1 lov3 th1s story sooooo much...

Very nice story, I really enjoyed reading it. Though I found it rather irritating that Luke was portrayed as this sort of super-Jedi, who can use the Force and shoot and use a light sabre without any more training than just being shown what the Force feels like. I did like the parts about Vader though.

Why would Luke listen to a crazy old man who had just tried to murder him while he was helpless, execution-style. I don't really think a "Golly I'm sorry, but I didn't have a choice" should cut it, you know?

Very interesting take on the events surrounding A New Hope. And I love how you incorporated Luke's line about showing Biggs how quiet he can be. I could hear his voice doing it just like in the deleted scene!

Looking forward to reading the sequel! Jelp

That. Was. AWSOME!

Great story! (:

I was about to start hyperventilating that this was the end, but then I realized there was a sequel. That little fact just prevented me from jumping off a cliff D

I hope you plan to finish this story.

Woah, so intense.

POor Luke. Interesting take on the story... I hope that he gets better.

OH! This is so sad! But I can't get enough of it! _

Bloody brillaint! But then again I am drunk on German white wine, and am in fact right now watching Star Wars... but sadly it's the remixed version with stupid CGI stuff... Geroge Lucas really raped my childhood...

Have a good one!

Cheers!

I'm loving this story so far! Update soon:)

update soon

loved it.