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| Phantom Drummer 2006-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was cute! Very fitting "in-between" moment. |
| angelic-ninja 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseWell it definately was fantastic. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Well writen, short but sweet. |
| megoddess2 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseHa! Very good, loved the description of Jackie. Nice nod to TCI in the last line. |
| HoVis 2006-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseNeat! I'd never ever thought about that 'gap' at the end of "Rose"... Great story! HoVis |
| dolly.the.sheep 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abusevery nice! i like it when gaps are filled in like that ... nice characterisation as well! well done! :) |
| wdihtd 2006-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really good! I enjoyed it. |