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| monkeybait 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseYou should rate this under humor as well! I liked it and thought it was entertaining, if not a bit fast. But that poem... *snickers*... it was very clever. And the Midork thing, too. Not to mention, Ganondork... huzzah! Koodos to you! Update soon. Author formally known as banana who is now known as monkeybait. |
| Whale Shark 7 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. I am completely stunned by your intro. That's the best one I've seen for a long time. Even though I know a lot more about Bionicle than Zelda, I enjoyed reading your story. You have talent. |
| madclip 2006-01-17 ch 1, | abuseHey SW Nut, I like the story very much: it is funny and you are finding a unique voice, an artistic or sub-creative voice. That is very good, very very. The dialogue is also very promising as are the character development and interactions. Not much actually happens here tho... i am impatient and want the plot to move forward with every segment, altho I know not every chapter can have the big juicy stuff in it... I know as you grow older and more experienced you will also have more and more to say too... keep it up SWN... your biggest fan, Madclip :-) |