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Reviews For: The Legend of Marina

monkeybait
2006-03-23
ch 1,
abuseYou should rate this under humor as well! I liked it and thought it was entertaining, if not a bit fast. But that poem... *snickers*... it was very clever. And the Midork thing, too. Not to mention, Ganondork... huzzah! Koodos to you! Update soon.

Author formally known as banana who is now known as monkeybait.
Whale Shark 7
2006-03-06
ch 1,
abuseWow. I am completely stunned by your intro. That's the best one I've seen for a long time. Even though I know a lot more about Bionicle than Zelda, I enjoyed reading your story. You have talent.
madclip
2006-01-17
ch 1,
abuseHey SW Nut,

I like the story very much: it is funny and you are finding a unique voice, an artistic or sub-creative voice. That is very good, very very. The dialogue is also very promising as are the character development and interactions. Not much actually happens here tho... i am impatient and want the plot to move forward with every segment, altho I know not every chapter can have the big juicy stuff in it...

I know as you grow older and more experienced you will also have more and more to say too... keep it up SWN...

your biggest fan,
Madclip :-)
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