This was pretty damn good for a one hour challenge. It was sweet and funny as hell and oh so entertaining. Very well done. Kim's hormonal shoe threats were cracking me up. Excellent job.

haha, that was really good. I remember reading all your past stories, too. Your one of my favorite authors actually,and it's nic to see you back. Now to add you on to my alert list, haha.

Welcome back!

Ha ha ha ha. Funny. Catch ya on the flip side.

Cute. :) Even though I'm not a fan of present-tense narration, it was nicely done.

Cute. I liked it very much. It's been a while since I've read anything here (I've changed my name from Twitch1). You're on my alert list, though, so I was happy to see some new material.