You are one of (if not the) best fanfiction writers out there. It was this work that got me interested in fanfics. I don’t see any ways you need to improve at all.

The story's pretty good so far. I'm liking it!

Usually I wait til I get to the last posted chapter before sending a review, but I noted several grammar errors in chapter 3.

"[Bridge] ran his fingers through his hands" Perhaps you meant hair? Though it would be interesting to see if such a thing were possible. Now Jack on the other hand...*grins*

Im sending this to add the story with my favorites

Wonderful story. Loved it

Best damned Bridge fic to EVER grace this site! Its going in my faves!

Nice job with Corona/Stella. She fit seamlessly, like she's been there all along. Now I'm gonna watch the episodes and wonder where she is!

Thanks for a great read:D

~Kip

Oh wow. Brilliant ending to an amazing story! Well done, I loved it!! Hope to read more from you soon!

Very cool. Catch ya on the flip side.

Great chapter and great story!! Excellent!! Hopefully, I'll read more of your stories! Keep up the good work!!:)

Aw! Great ending! Love it! I love the reunion! And finally everything is explained! Yeah! Great job! Great story!

Excellent ending. I am glad that Sky and Stella have reconciled. I hope that you will do a sequel on this story. Please write soon.

Awesome.

Cool. Catch ya on the flip side.

Great chapter!! I hope everything goes well with Sky in the next chapter. Please update soon!!:)

Excellent chapter. I am surprised that one could give that much blood. I am glad that everything has worked out for Stella and Bridge. Who knows, they may end up being a couple again. Please update soon.

Aw! Cute chap but I have to say, I was a bit shocked by Bridge's swearing! I guess I'm just not used to hearing that type of language from him! ANYways! Great chap! I hope Sky's techno spine operation works out! Update soon!