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Angleico3156789
2007-12-07 . chapter 1
Wonderful Story!
I like it very much!
Don't worry I don't do a lot of bashing unless the story REALLY sucked. It sucked so bad that nobody should be reading it. And trust me, with one of those stories, I'm not the only one bashing.
So Keep up the good work and keep writing!
Angleico3156789
Blitz Ultimate(Billy Bob)
2007-12-05 . chapter 1
Awesome story, you shouldn't care what other people think. Like Meyrin sucks, I don't believe she sucks she's a good character. I have one question though. Why does Cagalli give up on Athrun for? I've seen the episode when Cagalli doesn't wear Athrun's ring anymore, but could you e-mail me though why she does it. My e-mail is under my pen name.
xz
2007-03-22 . chapter 1
Nice one!
But if Athrun ends up with Meyrin, I'd not be that happy...
BlackFeatherz29
2006-04-18 . chapter 1
I really liked that episode, too. I don't hate Meyrin; in fact, she rocks because she was so brave in trying to save Athrun even though ZAFT was after him. This is a wonderful short piece; keep writing!
Brutal Moonshine
2006-03-26 . chapter 1
Asu/caGA belONgz togethsz 4ever…meryin sux… u sux 2’

JK JK JK no really I conldt resist but I really did like this fic. An Although I am more of a Cagalli fan than anything i really liked your portrayal of both characters.
deanna
2006-03-13 . chapter 1
it is a really nice story! Although i'm a AsuCaga fan, i don't go around bashing meyrin, all the poor girl did was save him and in the end she is the one getting bashed =(
Shimmering Rose Petals
2006-02-28 . chapter 1
I think you should continue, you have a nice writing style and it would be nice to have more Meyrin and Athruns.

I agree.. I don't think any of the flames people brought upon Meyrin have been fair at all.
Slightly Sinister Sinestra
2006-02-11 . chapter 1
Well, I'm kinda a fan of both pairings as well. But I prefer AthMey. This story was fantastic as it brought across both girls feelings. It was well written and emotianal. Pure class!
Athyra
2006-01-31 . chapter 1
Hahaha, I get what you mean by those unreasonable flames. i myself, I'll admit, is an Asucaga fan through and through, so Asumey is rather unbearable for me BUT, that doesn't mean I'm a Meyrin basher
personally I love Meyrin just as much as her sis.
The reason I'm not supportive of Ausmey is because the fact Cagalli just took off her ring...it's rather abrupt. Looking back at the Seed series and sudeenly there's the sequel with them not together anymore...it jsut doesn't seem right

Anyways I'm babbling and ur probably wondering why the heck I wrote this (- -) but I just want to say that I love this one-shot cuz you put Cagalli-and-Meyrin-talk (something they sorta neglected in teh series)(and that ou didn't make them OOC ^_^)

ttyl!!
Garowyn
2006-01-29 . chapter 1
Good work. Believable scene; I think it would have fit in the series itself. I'm a fan of Athrun and Cagalli - don't get me wrong, Meyrin is not a favorite simply because she just isn't. I don't hate her, especially since I could probably relate to her. She's just not one of my top favorites, like other characters aren't (and, by gosh, I can't favor every single one). Anyway, that was rather pointless. Like I said, good work.
MapleRose
2006-01-16 . chapter 1
Nice one-shot! I like the insight you've put into the relationship of the three of them, esp the interaction between Cagalli and Meyrin, because even though they like the same guy, they don't hate each other or anything. I like the subtility of both AsuCaga and AsuMeyrin in this. I guess in the end, it's not up to either of them is it...

I this this stands great as a one-shot, but it's your story, so continue if you like. ^^
KiraTatashi
2006-01-15 . chapter 1
I'm and Athrun&Cagalli fan and a Athrun&Meyrin fan too! Oh no, this is a signed review right? *Gulps* Wonder if my reviewers will kill me for saying that I support Athrun&Meyrin as well, *Gulps again*. Anyways, it was brilliant, I loved it!
Threedaysunrise
2006-01-15 . chapter 1
Great story and great writing though I have to be honest...Gundam seed Destiny does not air where I live so I only know a little of whats going on...Why is Athrun and Cagalli's relationship so fragile..(big AxC fan) and do they ever get back together again! Please...on hands and knees...tell me!
i Mel-chan i
2006-01-14 . chapter 1
I realy did like how you presented the story. Neither girl really did get Athrun instead they were just watching over him. Also Cagalli seems more like her character, she did after all did tell Meyrin to take care of Athrun.
If you continue to write more tha'll be gret because you're right after all Meyrin had nothing to do between Athrun and Cagalli.
simply -v-
2006-01-14 . chapter 1
^^ its really nice and sweet.

keep writing !! it would be nice to see more meyrin/athrun fics.
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