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| RANDOMGIRL 2007-09-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWoh |
| robins#1fan 2006-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuse*stares at screen mouth agape* |
| Southern-Rebels 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseHmm. Very good. Angsty, yes, but hell, it's supposed to be. The italicized words as the actions and POV of Robin was a very good touch. Realistic and dark of the mind of Robin. Was the female in question Starfire? I was just a little fuzzy on that, but otherwise it was clear. You've turned what is our favourite almost "kid" show at 4 to what we all like to (or try to do) do on the bondaries to make an excellently written story. Bravo. |