I think your story is very good. Personally, I dont read to have it sound like a aerospace tech manual.And who truly knows how fighters fly and respond to the rigors of outer space, especially experimental ones. :)

short, and sweet. good. (even though I dont like the implication that the Blackbird's a peice of crap)

who is interested in physics if we have Lee and Kara fighting for her life?! :D
Really like this story, it was very intense!

I loved the story and could care less about the physics of the thing. I'm glad you wrote it. My only wish is that it hadn't ended so quickly. I get the feeling Lee saved Kara as she had saved him in the Mini series, and would have liked to have read how he did it.

Eh who cares that the 'physics of flying' is off. Its YOUR story! And a very good one at that. Anyway, I really liked how you explored yet ANOTHER aspect of Lee and Kara's relationship. GOOD WORK!

That was a beautifully sweet story. Payback is indeed a ** - but it has to happen. She's saved his ** a few times, now it's his turn. They can't live without each other anyway, we all know that right?

Great story - nevermind the criticism about flying - really, we're writers here, how much do we know about the physics of flying in space? The story is about their feelings and emotions anyway, not about the science.

Enjoyed as always - just forgot to review! (too many stories around here you know!)

uh..whats pulling her down. she should only be going as fast as her last acceleration..and where would she be dropping to? is there a planet or moon near by causeing a gravitational pull?

Just one minor gripe: losing altitude? Relative to what? Altitude is relative to the surface of a planet. Also, the effect of engines cutting out in space is akin to drifting, not falling. But overall, a good fic. I like your Possibility series; keep it up!

so sweet...payback is definitely a **...good work

That give me chills to read. Very good fic! I'm glad that you let her live.

That was a *really* good story. I'm so glad you didn't kill her! For a while there, I thought you would. This is a piece that had me on the edge of my seat right up until the scene where she was waking up in sickbay. Excellent job!

Emily