what is with people and ridiculously short black cat fanfics? oh well, it was well written.

I'm crying here, it's so sad and yet so true! I love it! More please!

Interesting, short and effective. Well done...

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Wow, it was short but really cool. I really liked the last line, "But in reality, I only brought bad luck to myself". Great job, you capture Train's old personality really well!

Don't this series at all, but this is a wonderful mood piece, and tugs at the heart inexplicably.

Nicely done!