I know you haven't written since 2006 on this story, but I really like and was wondering if you could write some more. Could you would you, Pretty, pretty please!

Ha ha. WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!

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UPDATE SOON! This is really really good!

You should really, REALLY continue this.

I know you haven't updated in over a year but this is an amazing story. I would love to find out how it ends.

Just read this story for the first time and I gotta say that I love it! Very realistic in terms of Dawn's rebellion and Charlie's hesitance toward her advances. Love this story, please update! :D

This is a really good fic. It reminds me of that movie Thirteen, and trying to grow up too fast. Dawn has a great character and so does Charlie. Please continue!

Update soon? *hint hint* =D

Hmm...so I really like this fic. It's an interesting pairing. And I think that it should be updated soon...

It appears to be a well written and entertaining story so far. However, you haven't updated in quite a long time...

i just felt like mentioning randomly that if you guys don't update this story sometime soon i'm going on a shooting spree.

yep. i'm bored, lol.

Take your time to finish Most Likely To Succeed, but you've got to finish this at some point.

I love, love, love your tone. You have a great voice, and you always use the fact that we know the BSC to your advantage. Moreover, you build on the traits that were already there in the original work, which is one of the most important aspects of fanfiction.

And I envy your sense of suspense. And what looks like detailed, thought out outlines. Please, do update this story. (But the review stands for all your work, not just this one.)

Oh this is such a nice story. It would be great if it could be continued... :-)

Will you be finishing this story?