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| Scifi-warper 2006-12-08 ch 6,  | abuseWow, I feel bad, cause I'm totally rooting for Obi-Wan, even if he called her Anakin! |
| Scifi-warper 2006-12-08 ch 4, | abuseOkay, Obi-Wan is not stupid. He is so gonna catch her. |
| Scifi-warper 2006-12-08 ch 3, | abuseOh dear. Girl, come on. You got to still focus! F-O-C-U-S! |
| Nelarun 2006-03-28 ch 16, | abusethat was really good... loved the 'grounding'... Nelarun of Australia |
| cleo 2006-03-21 ch 16, anon. | abusethis is for the entire story... I likey dis one mosty of oll. haha. that sounded so bad. this was my fave, mostly because of zak and jaina's love sparks. they MUST get together and STAY together ya hear? |
| you-know-who 2006-02-09 ch 16, anon. | abuseI like it so far. But I honestly cannot believe that Jaina would get drunk!! HAHAHA! Anyway, I think you gave it an interesting plot by putting Brissian back in. |
| ClassicalBrunette 2006-02-01 ch 16, | abuseHey- I'm very sorry I haven't reviewed much recently...things have been terribly busy. I loved the ending to the story...very exciting, and the next one should be very interesting! I'll check it out when I'm done with the review. Just a note of constructive criticism (which you can completely disregard if you like)...Obi-Wan probably wouldn't use slang terms like "yeah right" or other things of that sort, since he's more of a "proper" Jedi. But that's only my opinion. Good job!! |
| Kyla 2006-01-27 ch 12, anon. | abuseThat was amazing! Please write more! |
| ClassicalBrunette 2006-01-23 ch 12, | abuseThanks for such an awesome update! What will Obi-Wan think when he finds her? What will happen to Brissian? Please continue! |
| ClassicalBrunette 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseGah! That's it?!? No fair! |