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| Warbender 2007-09-21 ch 3,  | abuseSo far so good. |
| MzPink 2006-04-13 ch 11, | abusewow i loved it you should do a sequel!! |
| larathejock 2006-03-13 ch 11, | abuseAhh, words to live by. |
| fallenangelcrys 2006-03-12 ch 11, | abuselove the poem! and the story! |
| fallenangelcrys 2006-03-11 ch 10, | abusethis is really great, i would have reveiwed before now but i wanted to keep reading! :D please ignore my email(if it came through). wonderful! :D |
| ShippyChick 2006-03-08 ch 10, | abuseThis was nice. Thanks for sharing. |
| Dark Star 2006-03-08 ch 10, anon. | abuseI like the story a lot, but i think you rushed into the Lee and Kara loving each other to fast. Also, i am almost sure that neither Kara nor Lee would tell strangers that they barley know that they are in love with each other. Over all thought, it was a great story that has a lot of potential. You should make it longer and drag it out a little. Let Kara and Sam become friends before Kara confesses one of her greatest secrets to her. Keep working on it. Good job. Dark Star p.s. sorry if you didnt want a review like that. but i think it has a lot of potential so i thought you might like to know how to make it better, in my opinion. |
| meenajon 2006-03-08 ch 10, | abuseAll right lady, that was way to short. But then again... |
| gnomesbeatfaeries 2006-03-04 ch 9, | abuseno life. no life. no life. no life. no life. no life. reviewing my own story! michelle |
| ShippyChick 2006-03-03 ch 9, | abuseI am really enjoying this. Keep it coming. |
| larathejock 2006-03-02 ch 8, | abuseYOU CLIFF-HANGING PERSON! YOU WRITE MORE THIS INSTANT! DO IT! THAT`S AN ORDER! - Lauren |
| larathejock 2006-03-02 ch 7, | abuseI love it! You are brilliant! And the whole 'women trained to use lethal force' thing:awsome! keep it up! -Lauren |
| larathejock 2006-03-02 ch 6, | abuseIt`s a combination of the 2 best shows ever! MORE! WRITE! NOW! |
| Otal the Fox 2006-02-27 ch 7, | abuseThat's a great story, I really like the concept. But, I'm sure you could have figured that, eh? I'm actually working on one of these crossovers too. I love a well-written crossover. They're hard to do. Speaking from a lot of experience trying to write crossovers here. I was about to give up on crossover stories all-together. Except mine, of course. |
| mel 2006-02-25 ch 7, anon. | abusevery good please continue |