what an unbelievable plot twist! bravo

"anyone out there think i need a sequel?" oh hell yeah

That was astonishing. How did you come up with that? Jeez, now I’m dying to start the sequel but I really need to get to bed. –headdesk- Why do you torment me so?

This is an awesome story, please tell me if there is a sequel and if not please write one! :-)

a friend recommended this. gotta say: she was damn right. this is bril. (:

so I already checked and saw that you actually wrote that sequel...(and thank goodness!) well, guess I know what I'll be reading in the next coupla days (:

brilliant story, I really enjoyed reading it. first ever Fantastic Four I felt inclined to read, btw, actually found it among someone else's favorites...

gotta admit, I love Johnny, always loved that brother-sister relationship, too. and, sheesh, the way you brought von Doom into this, as a sort of ersatz/wannabe father-figure, plain awesome. and apparently you came up with that idea in no time flat to boot. how'd you do that? awesome.

kudos to you. seriously. (:

I loved this.

Brilliant Story that I actually read in one sitting, as it was so enthralling!

The plot line was great; I never actually paid to much attention to the rationale behind the lights just as Reed himself different. Therefore the ending was a pleasant surprise!

The character interplay was very well written and you actually managed to keep them in character in regards to their response to the situation.

I loved the discussion between Johnny and Doom were Johnny’s past was analysed and painful memories were brought up.

"I want you to believe my sincerity when I say this, Johnny-I was the one who was prepared to be that mentor, that father figure. I still am".

Ultimately this line by Doom was brilliant. It summed up Johnny’s need for a farther figure perfectly. However I can't help but feel that in some way Doom was truly sincere in saying this, even though we all know Dooms interpretation was twisted.

Liked the background info between Reed and Johnny to and the potential for further development with the trust issue.

Ok. Off now to read the sequel!

Please, please, please, write a sequel. And get Johnny back. And don't stop writing, whatever you do. You have some serious talent!

Me: WAH! HOW DARE YOU?! MY. LITTLE. JOHNNY. IS. NOT! YOUR. SON! GOTTIT?!
*"Dr.Doom" points at her with a gun*
Doom: *creepy, 'evil-guy' voice* Any last words?
Me: Umh yeah, sorry 'bout that, I mean, it's like, you can totally see the similarity betwen you guys, no doubt you're relatives (at least),well , I'll just go, and leave you guys alone so you can have a great father-son moment? *runs away*
Hmph what a meanie... *sulks*

But OMG this is the most exciting and thrilling story I've EVER read! R e a l l y. With no doubt. You're the best. *favs story and author* (How come I haven't heard about you before?)
I lol'ed at the whole 'dentist'-thing. I mean, seriously; Who else than Johnny Storm lets himself get kidnapped by an old(and U.G.L.Y.), masked maniac and a DENTIST? Well, I'd rather choosen Mr.Fantastic and his scary drills than Dr.Doom&Co... But then again, I've never met Reed(or seen him with a drill)- so who knows?
And the whole caught-inside-a-box scene was really good written. And thrilling. AND touching. It was sad when Johnny&Sues bad past came for a day, and when I heard(okay READ) Doomies story... I almost felt sorry for the bad guy.
... NOT! Once again, LOL. Sorry. I just happen to be hyper, and.. Okay enough of THAT!!
Heh, I burst out laughing when I read that part: "And Reed... sorry 'bout the nose" I was like... Er wtf?! But later I was like "Oh, yeah... He broke it! XD" I didn't feel sorry for Reed, though. And that's a little unfair, when you think about how I felt sorry for DOOM! Oh well. *feels sorry for Reed* There you go, Reed!
And it's nice to see that Johnny and Ben actually CARES about each other. It's sweet. I love all of their nicknames, like "matchstick" and "junior" // "Pebbles" and "Big Guy"... So cute ^^

I realize that this is a pretty long(don't forget boring) rewiev, but I just had to express my excitement. This fanfic made my day! ^_^ So thanx for that ;3 *worships llnbooks*

Oh, and before I go(I'm annoying, arn't I? X3), I hafta beg you to make a sequel! I can't stand it if you don't... So please do? ^-^ *hopeful smile* As an outstanding author it is your DUTY to make sequels for fantastic fanfic's... If you don't Mr. Doom will come and get ya... *Doom appears behind her*

Cheers!
~DDA~

Omg, please write a sequel! You are a freaken genius that you came up with a story like this! It was so awesome. I cannot wait! :)

wow! i gotta say that this story is AMAZING!

really cool idea with the whole morse code and everything.

i shall read the next story when i have time but yeah,..you're a REALLY good writer

NiteAngel
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best chapter ever! JOHNNY ANGST RULES ALL!

love the story!

SEQUEL SEQUEL PLEASE!

Wow! I'm speechless! They should make a movie out of your story idea. Going now to find the sequel.

SEQUEL NOW!