hahaha loved it great job

Yes! Chen and Carter all the way! This was a lot of fun to read- not too heavy, but still not all fluff. The perfect balance. And I love the Chen/Carter rapport. Good job!

*Grins stupidly* I wuff it. They're so cute together :)

great story it isn't very often that there is a story about chen

Wha? That's it? You're really gonna leave it hanging like that? Doh!

Love the idle talks. Very sweet and funny. Why did you ever rethink about posting? ;)

Cute idea. Cute story. Why the hell not?

Cute story. I really liked it.

That was very mean! To leave us there... you need to write a sequel! There are too little John/Deb stories out there...

Oooh! U should write another chapter! What'll Deb do when she wakes up? And Carter? Hehe, that'll be a tough situation...

awwwwwww, this is great! love it! write more fics:)

Hmmmm...Interesting. Love the set up, and the progression of things. Well written. Liz

Cute! Damn that's an entertaining story. Come on, that can't be the end! Write a sequel to it please!

I really enjoyed this story! Hope you continue it1