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Pocket the Great
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
Sweet. I liked it very much, and no, I didn't notice that everything he got her was orange.
bellaurlucky
2009-04-05 . chapter 1
this was an awsome short story. I loved it!
I do think it was ironic to know that everything Kyo got Tohru was orange!
kia flower
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
it was kinda boring at the beginning if i were you i'd make it more interesting. i liked the title though!
Hikaru Maiden
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
Little sister had the flu. Twice. We both got our flu shot. Mom says my flu shot saved me from a winter attack. I use a humitifyer. I take breathing treatmeants. I do that one thing where hot, medicated water goes up one nostril and out the other. I use an inhaler. It is one of those one uses when they have allergy attacks. I get infection in my lungs and bronchitis. I have to stay out of the cold as much as possible and be careful when I catch any type of a cold. I get a fever, severe coughing, chest pain and difficulty breathing. I missed school several times for this. I also missed school because my period was so bad. I am on the safest medicine one can possibly be on for that. Birth control. I take other medicine. I take a vitimin E. I take a regular vitimin. I take medicine for ADD/ADHD, whatever it is called. I take Robitussin when I start coughing and sniffling and stuff like that. I have taken both DM and Cold and Cough CF before. I can barely lift my head from the pillow if at all. I am bedridden. I get a headache and I get dizzy. I feel hot and I feel cold. My fever was 105.5 degrees F before. My fever rose. My fever lowered. Mom says I was deathly ill. I remember asking her to turn off the lamp because it was bugging my eyes. I did not have glasses on and I did not have contacts back then. I could not see. I was mumbling something. I do not know what I was talking about and I do not think I knew at that moment either. I was only talking. There were times when my coughing fits got to the point that I felt liquid boiling at the back of my throat. I felt it travel up my throat. I was gasping for breath because I could not get a breath in edgewise between my coughing fits and my heart was pounding, my head was pounding, I was sweating, feeling hot, yet cold. The stuff felt thick at times and thin at times. It clung to the insides of my thorat and made it extremely hard to breathe and speak and it was wet. It had a wet feeling. It made my coughs sound wet. I cleared my throat a lot. My breath so often caught in my throat with the liquid and made me cough. The wet liquid so often tasted like blood. I so often felt like throwing up. That is exactly how hard my coughing fits were.
starchain
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
Oh I LOVED it =D It was so sweet, and I liked how the presents were just cute little things, makes-you-smile things, and not super dramatic LOVE CONFESSION~ things. You can just see the two of them, hoping the other one's gonna smile when they see it...

So adorable. =] Great job.
minimi37818
2008-12-19 . chapter 1
This was so cute that I really wanted to jump into the story and give Kyo a big bear hug! Tohru handled it well with lots of fluff! I
Feelin SPAZTIC
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
This was a good story!
Elena maiden of Gondor
2008-10-23 . chapter 1
si i will review your story. it was very sweet and yes i noticed everything kyo placed was orange. lol. i was amazed that yuki kept his cool the whole time this was going on. i know how jeleaous he can be when it comes to kyo and torhu.
Emmett'sMunkeyGurl
2008-09-07 . chapter 1
Great story!
VolknersGirl
2008-09-04 . chapter 1
I did notice that everything was orange! great job!
DangerousDiamondDarling
2008-07-27 . chapter 1
Cute! Really sweet!
Kyra
2008-07-10 . chapter 1
I really liked it, but I wish it was longer XD
Lunamione7
2008-06-28 . chapter 1
Aw, *CUTE*
lil'kagura
2008-04-18 . chapter 1
omg that is soo cute i really hope there is more
Heaven and Earth
2008-03-02 . chapter 1
Ha ha! That was cute! I liked that everything he gave her was orange! lol Too cute!
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