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Reviews For: Alternate Ending

LovelyLadyJem
2007-04-04
ch 2,
abuseLol, I just finished China Garden, and I thought your ficlet did it justice. I liked it alot! :D
PoisonXDeath
2006-03-19
ch 2, anon.
abusenot bad...i didn't think you were gonna update EVER...n i don't blame u for making this ur last chap. N-E-ways...it took me a while before i realized that at the end of the chap, claire n mark already moved the stone (i'm right...right?) u missed a few places that they went through before they got to the cave with the stone. I know..u didn't have the book..just thought i write something besides "not bad" for a change...^^
danielle
2006-03-13
ch 1, anon.
abusei thought that was good..that book needs to go on..dont stop.
StarFariey
2006-03-07
ch 1,
abuseWell, i like it. I hope you update soon, it's a good story.
intellect attracts
2006-02-06
ch 1,
abuseThat was cool! except for a few punctuation problems.. but it's great. = )
cruciolicous
2006-01-16
ch 1,
abusetat was real good miss perfection. keep it up...nice and fluffy...
PoisonXDeath
2006-01-15
ch 1,
abusehmm...that wasn't so bad...to me it seemed like something was missing, but i dunno what.
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