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Jan
2008-04-16
ch 12, anon.
abuseI loved your story. It was incredibly intense. I loved the interactions of the characters. I thought that the story could have been a little heavier and meatier on the actual Forensic work. But I liked the conclusion and the wrap up. I think you caught the essence of the characters well.
eustilly
2008-03-05
ch 12,
abuseSimply fantastic. You are a talented story teller. Bravo.
sara303
2007-03-01
ch 6,
abusegreat story i love it but i am not finished reading it yet so i am still exited
The Silent Rumble
2006-09-23
ch 12,
abuseand they get BUSTED!
great work =)
AlexCurtis
2006-07-10
ch 9,
abusegood
Leaflette
2006-06-26
ch 1,
abuseThis is a great story! *adds to favorites* Greg is so amusing. :)
princessako
2006-06-16
ch 1,
abusei am an old reviewer with a new pen name. and this story is still one of my favorites.
LittleWing
2006-03-31
ch 12,
abuseI loved Nick telling Greg how everything that happened to them, to him, wasn't Greg's fault...

Sorry that I haven't reviewed in a while, I've been writing and betaing, and over all busy...poor excuse I know...

Great job. Glad that they found Nick...poor man though with the cop standing on his hand and all. Poor Gill having to get Nick to realize where he was. But glad that he did. And wow, Nick died...well not really but still his heart stopped.

Hate to say this, but I think that I'm enjoying the fics more than the show right now...well okay so the writer's and everyone with the show would really hate to hear that.

Great job. I'm off to start on the new one.
Queen of Cliffies
2006-02-25
ch 12,
abusecan't wait for the new story and this one was awesome!
StoryDreamer
2006-02-24
ch 12,
abuseomg i sboudtly loved this story. i can't wait for your next one after this
SIlverBlood666 (not logged ...
2006-02-17
ch 12, anon.
abuseIt was good. I really enjoyed following through this as it was posted. The conversation Greg and Nick had was a little confusing in the way it was written, but it was cool.

I can't wait for your next story.

~ Jillian
rozzy07
2006-02-17
ch 12,
abuseSorry I havn't been consistent with my reviews for this great story but you must know I really enjoy your works. You have given this a wonderful end to what truly was a powerhouse of a story. Nick & Greggo both alive (Yay!) both dealing with what they have had to endure, and even a humanised Grissom was on show for Nick to wake up to. Great stuff. Really looking forward to your next story, which hopefully will be winging its way across soon.
kamadi
2006-02-17
ch 12,
abuseokay, I read the entire story, and now I'm crying *great*. The story was so emotional especially chapter 8. It was mindblowing good. I hope that you will write more of these stories because d*mn your good!
Vanagristiel
2006-02-16
ch 12,
abuseHi there!! I started reading this story when you posted chapter 11!! Meaning.. almost in the end!! And it was both good and bad!! It was good cause I'm one of the most curious creatures you will ever find!! hehehe But at the same time it is so exciting that waiting and wanting to see what's gonna happen next!! :) Just loved your story!! If you had the most fun writing it.. we had even more reding it!! :D Thanks!! Alredy waiting for your next piece!! :)
Vegela
2006-02-15
ch 12,
abuseYAY! I loved the ending...Nicky is such a ladies man even when he's half dead...hahaha...well I can't wait to read "nowhere to run" it seems like that story will be just as an interesting read as this one was.
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