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| B4K4 2008-09-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseVery cute :) you must tell me these stories again sometime ^_^ |
| AgentPersephone 2006-06-22 ch 2, | abuseThe ending sentence was intriguing...where have they gone I wonder? Le sigh, what lovely descriptive snogging! You use ten words instead instead of two but certainly not in a bad way. It's gentle and careful and just plain sigh worthy! I'm a sucker for romance. Beautifully written. Will we see some more progress? |
| AgentPersephone 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseVery good! I loved the description and even felt quite nervous whilst reading it! I thought it was Ron but the 'toulsed black hair' made me think of Harry. I liked it and now I feel slightly chilly! |
| Roonil 2006-01-14 ch 2, | abuseaww i loved it! they're so cute! |
| Baby-Tinkerbelle 2006-01-14 ch 2, | abuseThis is lovely, I really like how you've made it into a Harry/Hermione. Normally I am a Hermione/Draco shipper but occasionally I like to read Harry/Hermione. I really like this keep going I cant wait to read more. Tink |