Awe...

lol, that's the thing: She forgot to squint her eyes and frown. Nice one!

Very nice! I loved the ending... Now if only certain other characters would realize the same thing... XD

Short, but great writing, and made a good point. I liked it!

A seemingly innocent start to a profound ending. Excellently done

Excellent story.

It would in a way be nice to see Inuyash's thoughts b this but still, I liked it how it was.

Good luck & best eishes,

Hououza

Oh, I love your stories. What a great Kagome fic! I like the way you get inside her head, and I love the last line the most. :D