Not bad, but try to make your story more detailed. The sword fight between Raoul (aka. fop) and Erik can be more dramatic. Keep it up, anyway!:)

ok i do like erik/meg phics, but this isn't very well written. too much 21st century dialogue is being used

this is just constructive critism so don't think that this is a flame.

cheers,

Caroline Butler

it's a good story, i was just a little confused about the burning thing.

what a lovely story! thanks so much for sharing! :)

Oh My Goodness!

UHMAZINK! I was glued to the screen! Please continue to write more stories! :D

Your Humble Artisan

Artzee

Interesting...poor Meg...I'd die if my husband (not to mention the father of my unborn child) were to be executed. Good for Christine...and that better be Raoul's blood. Update soon.

KEENY I HATE YOU! u better update soon or i'll shoot you!

how can they be burning him? they didn't burn people anymore then, they hung people, but not burn...

OMG! I hope that chapter is up PRONTO! the suspense is killing me! :)

OMG KEENY! Brilliant Chapters! I was glued to the screen lol. Raoul and Christine are fecking evil! How could you make hot Christine evil? :'( .. anyway excellent story. Please update soon or I might have to punjab you. Question - How does Meg know that their baby is a boy? Why in the name of jesus did you have to involve the tuft of hair on Erik's (well im sure u were thinking of Gerry's) chest? lol

Gordon!

Hi Keeny, good chapter. Very well written I thought. I'll keep reading your phanphic soon. *tuts are your story being better than mines* xD.

Gordon!

You alone can make my song take flight. It's over now the Music of the Night!

P.S. - We both know Madame Giry's name is Rosemary lmao *private joke for anyone not understanding this*

oh my god they are SO going to rot in hell. please update. i'm hooked!

oh my god i wanna kill them. come on, they had to do that on their wedding night. god thats evil. christine and raoul can rot in hell for this!

aw! i absolutely loved this chapter. all the don juan stuff was hot and well written. its even funnier how christine hates them. i don't really like christine so its so amusing to see her seethe in jealousy.

Hey Keeny, i've read another two chapters of your story and just about to start chapter five. This is a very very good story so far. I didn't think I would like the whole Meg/Erik pairing but it has worked out well. I'll look forward to reading your later chapters. Speak to you later! *waves*

Gordon!

You alone can make my song take flight. It's over now the Music of the Night!