aw... that was so precious, it ended so much cuter than the acual series. Thanks for writting it. ^_^ I enjoyed it a lot...

IT WAS GREAT^^! I LUVD IT :)! I was eating Mac & cheese wen I was reading the 8th chpt and I cmpltly stopped jewing. That was the best part of the story and I must say that the ending was just as great!

awai! i luved it!

I really loved it! Thats going on my favorite list!

That was really good. That was definitely one of my favorite fanfiction stories ever! I especially loved the part when Kotarou punched Koutari! That was Sweet!

rele good story! ^_^

Loved it.

Aww...that was sweet.^^ I wish the manga would come out faster so we could know the real ending, but still, I really liked this story, so keep on writing, okay?^^

Ah... ^.^ ... >.< Kawaii!

THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED!

that was so sweet

Aww, sweet yo! Great story!

But wah...I want *more*. Any chance of you going back to this and explaining what ails Kazuma anyway, that he would persecute Tatsuki like this? A guy from Wakayama who's never met Tatsuki before...

Great characterization! Getting real curious by now whether you're going to go ahead and let Kotarou in on his powers and Tatsuki in this story. :)

Oh! Straight to the favorites list. :) Not only am I dying to read the rest (I too am waiting impatiently for book 6! and pleading with TokyoPop to translate the prequel :), but I'm in awe of your, er, cinematography on this one. All characters just right, and I could see the manga pages. :)

BURN YUUTO BURN! ...what? I was called for. I loved that, but, do we have to send him to jail? I think he's pretty and I can as sadistic as him...give him to me! I'll fix that little punk ** of his! I am a hge Tatsuki fan but...I can have fun with him too.

Morbid Maxwell~Dead boys don't always say no...