Cruger's line about what he's doing for Valentine's Day made me do a mental spit-take.

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But other than that, this is a great story.

it definitely made me laugh :) Loved it

i can just imagine bridge singing "rubber ducky"

awsum chapter

Good story. Don't kill be but i've never read this til this morning and i'm not lying when I as that, but last night I posted somthing Similariter to your wedding scene and it came from how my dad preposed to my mom and how my mom joked about how she was going to say no. I'm orry. Do you want me to change it? O, i'm an idiot for not checking if some one else had a similar wedding scene. I'm so sorry. I've already got a few people on my back about it. It's my story fireworks. the last chapter at the moment is a wedding and it got a few similar points as mine. I'm so sorry.

Saphire

This was a sweet story. But it took everyone's paycheck for a month to buy a diamond ring? That's what? Five month's pay. And just for the downpayment. I can't see Jack spending such a ridiculous amount for a ring. And I can't see Ally wanting him to do so. Or does Cruger pay so little? Oh well, it was still a sweet story.

*squelas*

He proposed!

Yipee!

Poor guy...

Why does everything revolve around money?

Ha!Z is so cute!

Let me think...Z!Definetly Z!

awesome story... loved it... keep writing more stories like this one!

Oh, romantic. I like it.

I dont think I've ever read a story with such a perfect ending!. You did a great Job keep up tfhe good work!

oh my gosh that was so sweet!