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| crookedview 2006-01-27 ch 8, | abuseThat was beautiful. I wish it wasn't over. CONGRATULATIONS, THAT WAS AN AWESOME FIC! |
| crookedview 2006-01-27 ch 7, | abuse“It is not true,” he says quietly, “what he said. You have not lost your beauty. Your beauty is of a different nature. It does not fade.” AW! this is SO good! |
| zola 2006-01-25 ch 7, anon. | abuseI LOve this I'm mean i have never thoud about the realtionship between Sayid and nadia. It almost maid me cry amazing ! keep writing ! pls |
| Jess 2006-01-25 ch 7, anon. | abuseI don't often review but this story has moved me to do so. Each chapter is balanced with both sadness and bittersweet joy appearing. You capture the emotions of the characters well and also the near-hopelessness of their situation. This is very good, I look forward to the next installment. |
| crookedview 2006-01-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseaw this is so bittersweet and beautiful. i love how she told him to free himself, and the reaction he had. love love love! |
| reennie5 2006-01-22 ch 5, | abuseWow. That is so powerful, and so...gosh, I can't find the words to explain it. I love the fact that it's from Nadia's POV. This is so well done, and I can't wait for it to continue. Surely Nadia knows that Sayid can never hurt her. Please continue this story, it's incredible! |
| crookedview 2006-01-22 ch 5, | abuse“They were all good enough,” she says. “But I did not love them.” “That comes later.” “Or so our elders tell us. Did you love her, the woman your father suggested?” “I am not a romantic,” he replies. I loved that part. excellent chapter. |
| crookedview 2006-01-21 ch 4, | abusewhy has no one reviewed? you have a really beautiful writing style, and this is so unique and miles higher than a lot of crud that's on this site. good job, i REALLY liked it. |