Hiya! Wowie, great chapter!

I liked the song you had. Didja make it up yourselves?

I really really enjoyed reading this chapter, and I like all the comments from the summoners, with the interrelated conversation between Auron, Braska and Jecht. Makes their conversations that much more interesting ... D

I noticed one mistake (He's using out powers against us, when it should be "our" not "out") but apparently law forbids me from getting my machete and going on a rampage. Can't you just imagine that? OMG! THERE WAS A MISTAKE IN THAT STORY! MUST KILL EVERYONE! Nahh, I don't really care. _

Well, it was an interesting and well-written chapter, and I'm glad you didn't have them get out this chapter (and yes I CAN be patient...maybe) because I didn't have much time to read this, and I probably would have had to get off before I finished reading it - and THAT would suck.

Wells, I'd better be letting you guys get back to your lives!

Keep up the great work and update soon!

* Serene Angel Wing

Keep on smilin' D

woop! the fic lives on! good chapter.. but i kinda thought that the convorsations between jecht and the summoners was a little too long... nothin catastrophic though.

Yay so the fic isn't dead.

Um... is this fic dead cause there hasn't been any updates in a long time. Or have your muses gone psycho and killed everyonme?

Cool! The second chappie of this story was just as fantastic as the first! Yes, I was wondering who the person was at the beginning, and then I was - "Duh! jecht!" - Sorry, I haven't played FFX in awhile so my memory's rusty.

I noticed a few spelling mistakes, but it was nothing big so that's okay!

Well, I'd better hit the road!

keep up the great work and update soon!

Serene Angel Wing

P.S - Wow. Isn't Roxi a character of her own huh?

Whoa. I mean ... whoa. This is a GREAT story guys! Usually I don't read long stories (Second Life, is of course an exception, Reyavie!) but this one had me enthralled. My eyes hurt now, but that doesn't matter! Imma gonna go and read that second chapter!

Make sure you guys keep up the FABBO work!

Serene Angel Wing.

P.S - I feel sorry for Brenna - and the five elemental summoners, of course. Who knew Yevon and Yunalesca would be such bastards?

Okay, first off, I want to comment on my last review. I think this DOES have potential, and I do think that it is better than average, I'm just disappointed, that's all. It really did feel very jumbled to me. The bits of humor was just out of place, and I still feel like the bickering between them is heavily childish. So this fanfic is 'good', it's just not living up to it's full potential, as I know at least three of you are better writers than this.

it is kinda dipressin story... still funy and briliantly written though, (dipressed AND funny? makes no sense how you do that?) anywho... its all good, til next time -waves franticly-

*_*... wow, this whole collaborative thing works! this is a great chapter! long aswell due to the fact tht it is 5 (mebe 6?) authors workin on it... and good aswell! action, story and humour! lol, nice!

This chapter, Kerri had read to me a while ago when she was writing it. So the end was new, but.. everything else I had heard already, though that doesn't take away from how well written it is.

I can't wait for the next chapter, as I am eagerly awaiting it so update now! lol just kidding... but seriously... Do it...

Buh-Byee!

Well, I must say- I am amazed at how well this chapter came out. I loved the beginning, it was extremely well written so kudos to you!

I promised Ker I'd read and review, so here I am. Sorry It's late, but better late than never, right?

Ok, well its really good and I sincerely urge you to continue! Buh-Byee!

woot! u updated! great chap update soon!

roxi n cass rock!

Okay, here we go. Holy crap, this is a long chapter.

Not too long? Yes, way, way too long. Overall, I didn't like it that much. I'll admit, it was original and had potential, but didn't live up to it. Half the time, I couldn't understand what was going on. There was way, way too much banter, too much beating around the bush and just more than nothing on the subject at hand. The bickering among the elements made them look more like small children trying to act tough than actual jaded warriors.

I think one of the biggest problems was that it was written by more than one author. There were too many times when the flow of the story just went out of whack. Whoever wrote those 'comical' parts should really knock that shit off, as it seems more like an eight year old wrote it than five authors.

I recommend having ONE author do a chapter, and a different author do the next, as doing it all at once has left it jumbled and distorted.

Man they're doomed having to rely on Jecht. So does this take place during Braska's journey or is it gonna envolve Yuna's as well?

RUN AWAY! THE MUSES ARE COMING! lol, great chapter everyone. keep up the good work, and don't forget to tell me when my turn is coming up, k?