Perfect awkward conversation between Ron and Hermione. You also used the Chamber of Secrets movie scene well. Very good job. I love to read Chamber of Secrets missing scenes since that is my favorite book of the series.

Aww, it was cute. Finally somebody did something relating to the handshake. It was big in the video world, but never in fanfiction. Well, I guess it's a sort of books/movies thing. Back to your story...It made me happy ^_^ They did hug!

ohh... nice one :)