i cried laughing at that bit of a pervert yelling in encouragement, it took me a while until i got the joke and i was half way down the stairs at the time. love it. :)

I loved this story soo much! Its was so far the best one I've ever read!! -^_^- You did an AWESOME job! :D

you have a habit of writing "own" instead of "owe"

Lol my left eye is bad too x3 I use my friend's glasses to see the blackboard in class. Those things are super clean. o0; Anyway, sorry this is the only review for this story. I read your fanfics on my DS (Don't ask. with the R4 card it's possible) so I can't review unfortunately. If you want to reply, look up my username AriSeptona (Imma lazy so i don't wanna sign in! ))

i love this story, but the writing is terrible :(

hey isnt halie you?...i mean charlie...take out the c,and r and it spells halie...

“Oh, Sakura, there’s something I wanted to tell you for a very long time,” said Halie. “You’re not very bright and you’re not very pretty.”

you got that from cinderalla story where haliry duff comes outXD
lol i love that part!

is it me or are we both the same i mean the question and all:)
the only diffrence is i dont ask question to poeple i just...well.i dont have to say...anyway awsome story i love it!

aww I liked Naruto's poem ^^

After reading Halie's poem, I went to my trusty dictionary . com/translate.

'Course, it wasn't a perfect translation, but I got the point. and it was cute. <3

It kind of feels like you ripped off hana yori dango with the plot. For example the K4 and the whole red card thing. Is that where you got the idead for this? Otherwise, it's not bad so far, I'm holding off judgement of the OC till later though.

I haven't read this in so long I loved it then and I still love it now lol!!

1,2,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,14 all true for me.

naruto is too cute. of all the movies he chose spirited away :] cute story. i liked the poem you wrote. i looked it up on yahoo.

I think it would be better if it wasn't so rushed. Perhaps if you described the fight scene a little or something it would be a little better. But it's pretty good none the less.