not bad. how does shego set ron and kim up

good begening. what happens next. update soon

Hope you continue this one. So Kim's been friends with Shego and Bonnie here, and Josh is worse than a jerk. Got a feeling who Shego's friend for Kim to talk to might be.

ok so far its ok. update

ok. good start. now update and the story would be even better. update soon

that's a good start. Now that you got the ball rolling lets see if you can keep it going.

Nice!

You have created a beautiful, vulnerable Kim!

I hope you don't follow the obvious path of generating a lesbian relationship with Shego (this seems to be a different Shego than in the TV series) . But you may have painted yourself into a corner . . . unless Shego realizes what Kim needs a MAN to sooth her hurt and calls in Ron.

If Ron arrives and has to deal with Kim's vulnerability, will he (1) comfort and console her, (2) become confused and unable to face the situation and leave, or (3) recognize that she needs the love of a man, take advantage of her volnerability and determine to become the man that she needs . . . that night!

Hmm, interesting possibilities. Good luck! I hope you make a good choice!

Great story. can't wait for the update

that is a very nice start and i cant wait to read the next chapter so keep up the good work

-Anghammarad-

OFF TO AN AWESOME START I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO CHAPTER 2! =)

It's starting good, continue the good work!

hey this is so awsome do i sense a kigo fic this could so totally be a KIGO fic i hope it is lol

Seems interesting as a start...Will watch and see what else to can make of it...Have a few thoughts on who the friend might be, but please not Dr. D...My god that would kill this story and interesting for a few, including myself...

this is a good chapter!! so u r going to do a lemon with ron huh?? GOOD STORY!!

Huh? 16 kinds of kung fu and she hits him with a lamp? Sheila?