thats reall cute. i like it.

lol, that was good. I likeed it:)

Loved it but I think the quote is veni, vidi, vici

OMG! This is really good. You are an amazing writer. This is really well written. It's a good storyline. Please contine, this could evolve into a brilliant story. But then again it's excellent as a onesoht. Keep up the good work!