good fic. i will be ready to read it if u decided to revive it. :)

Ya know, sapphires an rubies are actually the same thing, just differnt colors. Anyway, random bit of info outta the way... You're evil, writing a cliff hanger like that. Horrible person, yep. You should do somethin about that, like write another chapter ^-^

plot feels a bit too twisted, but
I REALLY loved the way u described Ranma and Genma.
Plot seems a fun to read. :)

please hope u update in the distant future. :)

And thus I complete another fic I hope to see you continue.

Let's see. What to say, what to say...

At first I thought this would be a crossover with Sailor Moon - minus the Sailor Moon universe. After all, you seem to have a bad guy going after a Queen, who's court is about to awaken since she's been awakened. I'm all the more intrigued now that that theory's been shot.

I absolutely hated your ending to the latest chapter. Ranma gets caught in the arms of Ryaine's boyfriend? (possibly a nonwanted boyrfriend though). Talk about awkward. The reason I hated it so much is that Ranma deserves to be understood by her family a little. She's been through a lot, and is going to go through much more later, so I would hope she gets at least some understanding from her family.

Speaking of family, I love how you've handled Genma in this fic. Bravo.

Well, that's it for now. I'm so tired that I'm pretty incoherent, so ja ne. Thanks for what you've written so far. ^^

This was so good! So sad to see that it seems to have died without any chance of resuscitation.

Please update this soon

*Sigh*

Another dead fic that I enjoyed.

very very good story.



I just wish you will continue it soon.

id be happy to review it was kickass hot stuff

Hello hello. It looks like you have a good story developing here, though I also noticed it hasn't been updated in about a year ^^;.
Your writing is impressive--engaging throughout. I only wish I knew more about Ranma so I could fully understand the story (I only watched about 30 episodes of it and that was a good number of years ago).
Anyhow, good luck to you, and keep writing :D.

another chapter would be nice.

Very good, though that tree sounds awfully familiar.

And are you trying to get Ranma's sister to hate him?

MOst interesting. Do not kill Ranma off. IT could be a n emotional rendering of Ranma and Ryaine - meaning a different emotional take on the whole family Saotome and Ranma's acceptance of her situation.

nice story, but it needs to be completed- i mean u left us kind of hangiing at the end

So...confused...jack and the beanstalk?...And Ranma is now in another bad situation concerning his sister...good job keep it up.