I hope that Hippolyta is correct about the grandkids.

Is there a reason that chapters eight and nine won't come up?

Cat fight! Cat fight! When Diana wants something (in this case Clark) she goes after it! Hee. Something tells me you enjoyed writing that. I was curious about the sudden arrival of Maxima. I had no idea Maxima was part of Hippolyta’s plan to bring Clark and Diana together. I love seeing this fun, playful side of Hippolyta instead of the cold, man hating queen. It’s so rare we get to see this side of her. And I hope she gets plenty of grandchildren, too.

So nice of you, Ronnie to take time out of your busy schedule to finish this. Thank you!

Flash! LOL! He’s too funny! I must admit I’m surprise he and J’onn weren’t playing childhood games like Connect Four or the battleship game. O! Clark made several future husband mistakes! He’s lucky all he got from Diana was her retreating backside. A normal woman may not have been so cool. And J’onn proves once again he is the smartest man in the Justice League.

Finally, Diana publicly admits she’s in love with Clark. Boy, she didn’t take long to come to that conclusion. :p Hippolyta is one sharp woman indeed and deserves to have some fun with her daughter and hopefully future son-in-law. Poor Adina. I can’t help but laugh at her being so confused at her queen’s behavior.

Interesting conversation between Clark and Hippolyta. Very engaging and humorous. You brought out a side to Hippolyta that is rarely, if ever, shown. You’ve showed even though Hippolyta is queen of the Amazons, mother to Wonder Woman, a strong warrior in her own right, she is still very much a woman with her humor, wit, playful games and desire for men. Diana better watch out indeed.

Great chapter. I love Diana’s musings on her feelings for Clark and the realization how both of them were sending mixed signals to each other and hesitant to acknowledge their feelings. Hopefully, Ollie will learn to keep his mouth shut in the future. If not, I will certainly enjoy reading him getting what he has coming to him.

Whoa! I wasn’t expecting that! I thought Clark would leave the Earth and it’ll be another “Five years later” or something like that. Nice to see the wheels are starting to work in Clark’s head in regards to Diana. ;) I have a good guess as to why Clark is going to Themyscira and I can imagine indeed it’s not going to be fun. Well, not fun for Clark. Me on the other hand…… Heh. Heh.

At least Lois finally came to turns of her feelings toward Diana but I assume Diana already knew of her feelings toward Clark. It's always hard to see what's in front of you.

If only Lois in the comics behaved as your version of Lois. She may be more likeable now. Write more. Oh, wait. You did. :p

I wonder where Clark will go. Hopefully, he won’t be gone too long with Diana waiting for him. I wonder what final letter Lois wrote to Clark.

I got to say that i love the story. an amazing job.

Wow! Totally unexpected as to where you were going with this. That was very manipulative what Hippy did - I like it!

What part are you talking about that I won't appreciate much - that it ended?? LOL

I thoroughly enjoyed finding out that Hip was behind all this playing this out like a chess game. Kal appropriately macho when he got to Themyscira. Diana claiming her victory prize. And we have our happy ending. BRAVO, MM!

Very funny and wonderfully done. I love Diana took her prize and how Polly was on top of it all. I do love an assertive Kal too.

This story I knew right off was wonderful and to me felt unfinished and sorry you seem to feel pressured to write more but you managed to write something really that captured us cause it was so well done.

And if people are haranguing you for more it's cause we enjoyed it so much.:)

I would have liked to have had one kiss like in the old movies...you know you wait and wait for it?... but now it's done...and I feel sad that is it...oh well.

But thanks for picking it up . Great job. Take a bow and hope you don't retire again cause you too good a writer to twiddle your thumbs.:)

Marvelous! But now I want to see the run up to the wedding, with at least one major catastrophe or villain in the way!

I loved Hippolyta's machinations revealed -- and wish the reconciliation scene between Kal and Diana had been a bit less rushed - other than that, I loved your characterizations and even Maxima's dissembling before the Queen!