Ino was hilarious at the end of this, as was Shikamaru. I agree, Chouji does have to be the smartest member of team ten.

Aah, I found this story ages ago and thought it was brilliant, then I lost it! TT_TT but I have discovered it again, and it is stull just as awesome. And yes, Chouji is the smartest member of Team 10. XD

Sweet with a rather dark undertone... Commendable!

cute!!

XD

Totally loves Chouji~! :D! nice fic~

That was an adorable read. xD Thank you for entertaining me!

Heh, this is a cute fic. I get the feeling that it is ShikaIno.
That Ino thought Chouji was implying that she should admit she likes Shika and get him to meet her father as 'her boyfriend'.
Or am I getting it completely wrong? @_@

Heh, great story. Good job in keeping them in-character. Hope you don't mind if I add this to my C2.

Good dialogue and pacing, you hit the characterization just right. The assasination was clever and Chouji was adorable. I enjoyed it very much, thanks for writing.

In a way, it's a bit of a dark story, but I also really like it. It reminds you that ninjas were meant to be assassins, not glorious soldiers. I especially love how you've captured Choji. He's so sweet and he takes such good care of his team ^.^

Aw, this was so sweet. That part about Shikamaru wanting to get a free ride home made me laugh out loud and sque! Chouji is adorable ^__^ And and and I love their arguing. Dude. *worships*

I'm approveing.

Very fun! This story was a good way to describe how a team keeps their humanity while ending the lives of others. I thought that you made good use of their jutsu without going overboard, and the dynamic between the three was very consistent and believable. I enjoyed it very much.

o.o;

EVIL CHOUJI

Love

Chouji's a good teammate...