I LOVE this story, and I think these 2 are like the best couple ever, I kinda wish they would swallow there pride though and just let eachother love oneanother.

Jeez I just feel like banging their heads together sometimes, The pair of them are just so frustrating

Ah, a little peek into the stubborn Blue's mind~ I loved how you gave us a sneak into their (true/hidden) feelings.
Sometimes I want to give them a slap because they're just too prideful (and stubborn for I'm guessing who either admits loses? Still... I think Toya's the victor tee hee) to admit their feelings. D; Still I just love their relationship (and this story~!)
Bittersweet and simply love.
c:

That was sweet i liked it alot u should think about making it into a book...or writing a new one, but longer.

I feel lyk getting hold of Toya and Blue and shaking them very hard and shouting "can you just let go of your pride and admit how you feel about each other".
Fact is I myself would refuse to let go of my pride but I am starting to get mad at these two.
Your plot is kind of cruel...and I love it.

I want to slap Blue SO hard. Would love a fic where Blue actually says how he feels...boy wouldnt that throw things lol. Great fic. Well done! - Lenna

Love this story so much.
I've read every Bluex Chatoya story you have ever written, but this I must say was the best.
Cause he admitted that he loved her to the reader.
Blue is cold hearted and dangerous but in this, he seemed different, move affectionate.
But I was wondering, if you were going to write anymore stories Involoving Blue and Chatoya?
Great work
Love n Hugs
xoxoxoxoxo

wow.
that is an incredible, amazing and very powerful piece of writing.

It gave me the chills, I loved it! I have read Chimera and I am soo glad that Blue is coming around. Do you think you could write another one where Chatoya learns somehow that Blue cares about her...I think she deserves that much after all he has put her through. I will adore you if you do that!
Fantastic job with this one!

freakin' awesome, i always knew blue would come around.

wow it's been ages and then i remembered how much i loved your stories and ran a little search!
Nice one shot, better insight into blue's character may have to go back and re-read lol.
xhx

I a very big fan of Blue and Chatoya.
But what about Cougar and Chatoya?
They are a great couple, I have read everthing about Blue and Chatoya.
All of Chimera, My December and The Edge of the Horizon.
But Blue is a tad too evil.
Okay he's very evil.
My friends have all read your storys and are starting to call he DEVIL SON!
Please can you write a story that has Cougar and Chatoya pairings and some Lemons in them?
I really think Cougar and Chatoya need some happiness after everything that has happned in Shimmer and Chimera!

Thanxs Em
x
p.s Keep up the good work >< '~'

Lovely lovely lovely. I do adore your use of words and the tangled web of this couple.

This was great. I love Blue and Chatoya. You should write more stories based on them.

aww this makes me want to cry! thanks for updating on blue and chatoya! i LOVED chimera...and this was the perfect kind of "epilogue" even though it's sad =)

That's an interesting division to be made. And a great study in human nature.

And I hope you can imagine the incredible frustration you're putting me through, you cruel woman. Even if it is their fault.